Wednesday 2 March 2011

Peer Feedback For Rough Cut Piece

1. Camerawork - what type of shots were used? Were they useful/ effective?
Only a few camera shots used!
- POV
- Pan
- Medium


2. Mise-en-scene - discuss areas of lighting, props, costumes/ location choice.  Does is work with the genre?
- Successful lighting (dark/mysterious/natural).
- Costume smart.
- Props were stereotypical equipment for a detective.
- Location fits genre.


3. Editing - transitions/ pace/ shot duration - how have these ares been constructed so far?
- Shot duration is too long.
- Pace is quite slow.
- Needs more transitions.


4. Sound - diegetic/ non-diegetic?
Naturalistic soundtrack, needs a soundtrack to go and add more atmosphere.


5. Which ares need improvement?
Editing and finalising.


6. Which areas do you think work the best?
Mise-en-scene.

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